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Water in Exam Room

April 12, 2019 5 Comments

Water in Exam Room

By Rosemary Johnson

“Water in clear bottles with labels torn off,” said Mrs Invigilator, strutting up and down our lines of desks waiting to start Maths Paper One. “No, Phoebe. That’s orange juice, not water. Water is colourless.”

The other girls sniggered. I forced a smile. I know I’m not cool like them.

Mrs Invigilator didn’t say anything about the label-less plastic bottle of transparent liquid I took into Maths Paper Two. Vodka’s colourless. Vodka’s odourless. I giggled over calculus. I fell off my chair. But I got my grades for Cambridge.

Trouble is, I’ve had to leave. Addiction issues, said the college doctor.

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  1. Judy Reeves says

    April 12, 2019 at 7:18 am

    I love the irony of this story
    It is very cleverly written and funny. It perhaps smacks of the truth? I enjoyed reading it.

    Reply
    • Rosemary Reader and Writer says

      April 12, 2019 at 7:55 am

      Smacking of the truth? I couldn’t possibly comment.

      Reply
  2. Declan Hill says

    April 12, 2019 at 11:45 am

    i really like morality tales where a lie has consequences. Nice touch at the end, and leaving the possibility open for the protagonist to make choices in the future.

    Reply
  3. Cassandra Hamilton says

    April 12, 2019 at 1:07 pm

    Great description. I long to know how the character changed and what she did to evoke change.

    Reply
  4. Cathy Cade says

    April 12, 2019 at 1:31 pm

    The character learned that you can fool everyone and be pleased with yourself but still miss the point.
    Love it.

    Reply

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