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Watering Down

May 21, 2025 4 Comments

By Rhianna Frances

We explored the forest together every autumn. This time you drudged behind, begging Dad to take us for ice-cream.

You huffed down beside me.

“What’re you looking at?”

I beamed up to your flat expression, then pointed down. “Fairy ring!”

Inside, there was a teeny leaf. Maybe a cloak? A wing?

You reached for a mushroom. I pushed you away.

“No! Don’t break it!”

Phew. Close.

“Ha ha, you’re a baby. Fairies aren’t real.” You clambered up, trampled the ring, then sauntered away like you hadn’t destroyed the world.

I cried out six years’ worth of wonder, watering the forest floor.

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  1. Greg Nooney says

    May 21, 2025 at 8:15 am

    I love your last line.

    Reply
  2. Sharon Murphy says

    May 21, 2025 at 8:35 am

    I can feel the hurt in your writing. Well done.

    Reply
  3. Ed Kratz says

    May 21, 2025 at 2:50 pm

    Great story. And a perfect ending

    Reply
  4. Nikita says

    May 21, 2025 at 5:44 pm

    Beautiful. So much in so little. Each word deserves its place.

    Reply

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