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Waters of Reflection

May 1, 2015 5 Comments

Waters of Reflection by Phynne Belle

By Phynne Belle

As the flood carved its frenzied path through unwonted crevices, it remained as mindful of its purpose as it was fretful of its terrible reputation.

Catastrophe. Destroyer. Are eons-rich of being among Mother Nature’s black sheep remotely rectifiable?

Surely intent, good—however overshadowed—far outweighed weighty, ill repute?

The waters parted company, bidding each other farewell. Some intermingled in rivers and streams of no less fervor and direction, but of undeniably better recommendation. Others strived to end their days in uncommon peace and paltry gratitude, ensuring the verdant, lush, and the blooms, perennial.

The flood wended its way, brooding and contemplative.

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  1. Firdaus Parvez says

    May 1, 2015 at 6:51 am

    This is so beautifully written Tricia! Love love love it!!

    Reply
    • Tricia De Jesus (@PhynneBelle) says

      May 1, 2015 at 5:11 pm

      Thank you so very much, Firdaus! I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

      Reply
  2. skylarking4fun Rebecca says

    May 1, 2015 at 8:43 am

    Another great piece of writing Phynne Belle.

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    • Tricia De Jesus (@PhynneBelle) says

      May 1, 2015 at 5:12 pm

      You are so kind!

      Reply
  3. DeRicki Johnson says

    May 7, 2015 at 6:59 am

    Love this. It strikes me that we people are so much like these waters. ????

    Reply

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