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Weight Lifting

March 28, 2016 2 Comments

Weight Lifting

By Grady Beavin Manus

He saw a pebble there on the shore. Round. Smooth. Featureless. Nondescript. The only notable thing was its solitude—its aloneness. He felt a strange remote kinship with the small stone. He knew it would be hot from the mid-July sun, unlike the cold metal of the gun he held. The pistol was surprisingly heavy—as if it held the weight of the world. Perhaps it did. In a breath or two the weight would be over. A sad half-smile crossed his lips as he looked at the pebble. Oddly comforted, he raised the gun and took a long deep breath.

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  1. Jimmy says

    March 29, 2016 at 6:09 am

    Uncomfortable subject, but I really liked it.

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  2. J.D. Stampone says

    March 30, 2016 at 6:31 am

    I really liked this story. Very well written and atmospheric.

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