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What Is Best

July 3, 2017 3 Comments

What is Best

By Tom Shanahan

“I will dwell in the house of the Lord forever.”

White sand was soft on my cheek, and waves warmed my icy feet. I did not recognize this place, and it felt quite different from the sterility of my hospital bed where I had fallen asleep. With one eye, I saw the never more beautiful sky and darker blue water join together.

Just then I heard familiar voices. My son, Bible in hand, my grandson and his wife: “It’s what is best. No pain, no tubes.” They boarded our beloved fishing boat. Stricken and mute, I watched as they bounced away.

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  1. James Byrd says

    July 3, 2017 at 7:04 am

    Powerful, Tom.

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  2. Heather says

    July 3, 2017 at 7:45 am

    I felt so many emotions while reading this superb piece. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    July 3, 2017 at 9:14 am

    Another WONDERFUL story! Two in a row. This one is really touching. Great job!

    Reply

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