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What Was to Come

May 9, 2016 6 Comments

What Was to Come

By Patricia Ann McNair

He lost his mother.

They were out in the night; she wandered off.

It wasn’t the first time. They’d be sitting on kitchen chairs in the yard telling stories—she had eighty-some years of them—and she’d stand up, shaky on a hip that didn’t work much anymore.

“Be right back,” she’d say, and usually she would be. After a walk in the woods. A squat and a pee.

This time though, he had lost her.

“Ma,” he called into the dark. “Ma?”

He heard it then: what was to come soon enough. Any day now. The grief. The loss.

“Ma?”

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  1. Kerry E.B. Black says

    May 9, 2016 at 10:02 am

    Oh, this is sad.

    Reply
    • Patricia Ann McNair says

      May 22, 2016 at 9:56 am

      Thank you for reading. And for the feedback.

      Reply
  2. Kathleen Quigley says

    May 12, 2016 at 7:58 pm

    So much in so few words. Powerful.

    Reply
    • Patricia Ann McNair says

      May 22, 2016 at 9:55 am

      Thanks, Kathleen. Preciate it.

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    May 12, 2016 at 8:35 pm

    Sad story; brings a tear to the eye.

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    • Patricia Ann McNair says

      May 22, 2016 at 9:55 am

      Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, Bobby Warner.

      Reply

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