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Window

February 16, 2020 6 Comments

Window

By Ryan Benson

The man views his family through the window. His sons and daughters play and run about the room. They seem happy except for a few worried looks from his wife now and then. God, his wife deserves better.

Touching them is all he wants but it hurts. Is the pain in his head or chest? Children that young should not have such sadness thrust into their lives. Why can’t he just play with them? Is it boredom? ADHD? Guilt?

The glass exists only in his mind, or so everyone says.

He broke the barrier before, but without fail, it always returns.

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  1. lisafriedlanderlicsw says

    February 16, 2020 at 7:21 am

    I really like the mystery of this.

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  2. Meghashri says

    February 16, 2020 at 12:52 pm

    Stunning!

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  3. Angie says

    February 16, 2020 at 1:05 pm

    Beautifully written and really feel for the man.

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  4. Justin Boote says

    February 18, 2020 at 5:11 am

    Awesome! So much conveyed in so few words!!

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  5. Edmund says

    February 18, 2020 at 9:28 pm

    Great story. I love the darkness of it. It’s unsettling in a good way.

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  6. SelmaWrites says

    March 4, 2020 at 5:45 am

    So cool, Ryan Benson. Congrats. Love it.

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