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July 26, 2017 7 Comments

Work

By Maria Cecilia Azar

Got it. Thank you, Google! Liver surgery. Not my liver, my cousin’s liver.

She needs surgery. A liver resection…

The liver regrows; it’s not like I’ve crippled her.

She’ll be in the hospital five to seven days. She’s a single mother of two, and needs help with the kids.

What if your boss asks your brother? You work together. No one likes my brother; they’ll believe me.

She’s my cousin on my dad’s side, and they don’t talk. My brother’s stubborn, so he’s staying.

They’ll believe my non-existent cousin and her liver surgery. How else do I take a week off?

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Comments

  1. Max Puber says

    July 26, 2017 at 3:44 am

    Could WORK.

    Reply
    • Ma. Cecilia says

      July 26, 2017 at 9:49 am

      Ha! Touché…

      Reply
  2. Iris N. Schwartz says

    July 26, 2017 at 6:58 am

    Chilling. Taut. Congrats!

    Reply
    • Ma. Cecilia says

      July 26, 2017 at 9:49 am

      Thanks!

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    July 26, 2017 at 8:57 am

    Nice imagery of a devious, nervous mind. Good story.

    Reply
    • Ella Syverson says

      July 26, 2017 at 12:19 pm

      I beg to differ. More a reflection on the lack of adequate vacation time provided by most employers.

      Reply
  4. Frank Hubeny says

    July 26, 2017 at 5:34 pm

    All the reasoning is laid out well. Nice story.

    Reply

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