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Yawm Alfasl

August 16, 2017 3 Comments

Yawm Alfasl

By Fatima Saeed

I dream of Yawm alfasl; the unending night pregnant with untold horrors. A lifeless moon eclipsed by blackened skies. Ravaging flood and terrible thunderstorms. Earth torn open from powerful underground quakes. Folk speak of ages past; of a once glittering sun and scintillating stars. We take to the mountains and caves, like Moses’s kindred in the beginning.

I awake in a cold sweat trembling from fear and exhaustion. There’s movement in the room; impossible to tell whether man or beast. I lay still till Nurse comes in, carrying a tray of injections. Maybe she’d be kind and unlock my chains today.

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  1. b. says

    August 16, 2017 at 12:27 pm

    I sense that words have unlocked your chains. The next story will let your readers know if your nurse was right in setting you free.

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    • Jack Spies says

      August 16, 2017 at 1:41 pm

      I think there is something to what b. has said, but I tend to enjoy purple prose, whereas most nowadays don’t, but for Judgement Day – what else? Best wishes for your future writing, Fatima.

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    August 17, 2017 at 9:57 am

    Beautifully scary. Great job!

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