
By Fatima Saeed
I dream of Yawm alfasl; the unending night pregnant with untold horrors. A lifeless moon eclipsed by blackened skies. Ravaging flood and terrible thunderstorms. Earth torn open from powerful underground quakes. Folk speak of ages past; of a once glittering sun and scintillating stars. We take to the mountains and caves, like Moses’s kindred in the beginning.
I awake in a cold sweat trembling from fear and exhaustion. There’s movement in the room; impossible to tell whether man or beast. I lay still till Nurse comes in, carrying a tray of injections. Maybe she’d be kind and unlock my chains today.
I sense that words have unlocked your chains. The next story will let your readers know if your nurse was right in setting you free.
I think there is something to what b. has said, but I tend to enjoy purple prose, whereas most nowadays don’t, but for Judgement Day – what else? Best wishes for your future writing, Fatima.
Beautifully scary. Great job!