
By Shannon McPherson
Esther slumped in her wheelchair and watched butterflies flutter outside the hospital window. The right side of her face drooped, a residual effect from her stroke several years prior. She came daily to watch butterflies, enraptured by their movements, and she yearned to stretch her legs, unmovable since her stroke.
Her eyes followed a yellow butterfly as it drifted into a spider’s web, its bright wings beating frantically as it tried to escape. She watched it struggle against sticky webs, its wings gradually beating slower. Esther watched it fade and realized, in that moment, what it felt like to be trapped.
Excellent flash. A sad story about a woman’s stroke and her love for butterflies. I like how it ended with the butterfly trapped in the spider’s web showing how the woman felt since her stroke. Great imagery. Well done!
Loved the analogy conveyed so well in this story. Well done.
Haunting. Ouch. Well done.