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Yes, Mother

June 22, 2024 7 Comments

By Sascha Reinhard

“No more crying now. You will ruin your makeup.”

“Yes, Mother.” Beatrice stood rigid. She had always liked Mother brushing out her hair. Now, the memory would be sour.

“This is for the good of the family. A girl of ten wouldn’t understand. But one day you will and be grateful for it.”

“Yes, Mother.”

They led her outside and placed her hand into the meaty paw of a man with a dangerous gleam in his eyes. She locked away her fear deep inside. Do. Not. Cry.

The priest raised his voice. “Today, two great houses forge a bond of marriage…”

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  1. julie turland says

    June 22, 2024 at 4:11 pm

    A sad story, but unfortunately this happens still with young girls as young as nine or ten being forced into marriage.

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  2. Laura Besley says

    June 23, 2024 at 5:15 am

    So sad.

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  3. Dan Graves says

    June 26, 2024 at 7:32 am

    Friend of mine wrote a short novel, Toropo: Tenth Wife, about forced marriages in Papua New Guinea. I just re-read it last week. You’ve captured so much of the fearful and awful experience she describes in so few words.

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  4. Lian says

    June 26, 2024 at 8:52 am

    Amazing how you capture all the horror in such a short story!

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  5. Ed Kratz says

    June 26, 2024 at 10:24 am

    Great depiction of horror and a horrible custom.

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  6. Sue says

    June 26, 2024 at 11:24 am

    Moving story. Helps raise awareness of a horrific custom still practiced in some areas of our world.

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  7. Ramona Taylor says

    June 26, 2024 at 12:59 pm

    “… Mother brushing out her hair. Now, the memory would be sour.” That was a knockout punch in this sorrowful tale.

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