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July 31, 2015 8 Comments

Yes

By Prospero Dae

He walked to the store, paid for an icy cherry soda, and left the cashier a large tip. Then he continued to the shoe store where he thought he’d buy himself some comfortable loafers, but the place was closed. He strolled passed the pearl-gray house where a tiny dog, Titan, always barked chirpily—but he wasn’t on duty just then. Traffic was pretty light, so he danced in the middle of the street like a lunatic.

Some narrative time elapses and he unexpectedly finds himself having breakfast. A hag speaks: “Have you made the appointment yet?”

“Yes,” replies the needy sleepwalker.

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  1. Cynthia Jobin says

    July 31, 2015 at 3:29 pm

    If a hag is the major speaker, then somnolence is the only defense…that and dancing in the middle of a thoroughfare under a full moon.

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    • exiledprospero says

      August 2, 2015 at 10:53 am

      And, if this story takes place today, under a blue moon.

      Reply
  2. Rob McShane says

    July 31, 2015 at 3:55 pm

    And what a dream… Shhh, let’s not wake him…

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    • exiledprospero says

      August 2, 2015 at 10:54 am

      A hag at breakfast. I think he was already awake…

      Reply
  3. Mary says

    August 2, 2015 at 8:36 am

    Fanciful dream with playful energy and then “the appointment.” Left us all wanting to know ~

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  4. exiledprospero says

    August 2, 2015 at 10:55 am

    Does the sleepwalker realize he is needy or is this just a narrative intrusion?

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    • Cynthia Jobin says

      August 2, 2015 at 2:21 pm

      The question is….what does the “needy” sleepwalker really need…and will it in any way be found at “the appointment?”

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      • exiledprospero says

        August 2, 2015 at 2:41 pm

        A therapist can probably cure him of sleepwalking, but not of having an unhappy life.

        Reply

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