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You Left Me

April 3, 2016 3 Comments

You left me

By Jeanne Davies

Your eyes hold a distant stare. I try to wake you, but you’ve become an empty room.

Smoothing your ruffled down, I realise I’ll never again hear you whistle or sing; never witness your joy as you welcome the dawn or watch with you as the sun withdraws at sunset and heavenly bodies rise.

A satin veil draws across my skin and a great sadness engulfs me in vacant grey.

I get into bed alongside you, embracing your cold naked body. Is this all we are then—pieces of flesh and bone born to die? The you I knew is invisible.

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  1. Grady Manus says

    April 3, 2016 at 11:06 am

    Beautiful! Very nicely written.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    April 3, 2016 at 6:56 pm

    Grief and longing and not wanting to let go. A very tender story.

    Reply
  3. Glenn B Miller (@Glenn_B_Miller) says

    April 6, 2016 at 3:05 am

    Eerie, haunting, lovely

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