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Your Beauty

March 22, 2019 9 Comments

Your Beauty

By Sam Olson

I am sore, sad, and empty; anyone can see that. But unseen is your photo on my dresser. I take care that the scent on your shirt does not mingle with mine.

Your shoes wait patiently by the door. In the evening, when the sky is like backlit cotton, I think of you.

Hair. Body. Blue glass eyes. The art you almost were.

On some days I wish it had been different, but I cannot say I regret what I did to you. The real art was the kill, and then the restoration. Now you are part of my private collection.

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  1. Leif Gregersen says

    March 22, 2019 at 2:54 pm

    Brilliant

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  2. Cathy Cade says

    March 22, 2019 at 4:30 pm

    I had to think about that one – bit of a shiver…

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  3. Liss Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    March 22, 2019 at 6:30 pm

    Yes, intriguing and shivering. Well done.

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  4. Ted Miller says

    March 22, 2019 at 10:21 pm

    Superb. Thought provoking.

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  5. Susan says

    March 23, 2019 at 12:49 am

    You had me at “backlit cotton”. Well done!

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  6. Cassandra Hamilton says

    March 25, 2019 at 3:56 pm

    It does not make sense to me that a photo that is out on a dresser is unseen. Anyone who enters the room can see it.
    Then, I wonder: were the blue “glass eyes” literally glass?

    The rest of this I understood and enjoyed very much.

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  7. Sheila Madden says

    March 25, 2019 at 5:30 pm

    Brava Sam! Really well done.

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  8. David Berger says

    March 25, 2019 at 5:53 pm

    Too obvious.

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  9. Nam Raj Khatri says

    March 25, 2019 at 10:24 pm

    I can feel but can not see full story. I can understand that you are restoring but not clear how was it killed.

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